But the point of the post was to get feedback on my story. All some people pretty much did was just sit there and go " the grammer is bad", and then repeat it over and over, which is really rather redundant and pointless. Saying it once should have been enough. Obviously if I was submitting this...
wow, this is a tough one. For you I would almost suggest 1920's, because of the tube shape cylander,they would accomodate your bust, as well as your waist, plus they are easy to alter.
If you fell in love with the 1940's, that is what you should wear. I have actually seen some low waisted styles in the 1940's era, emulating the 1920's look. I have also seen some pieces from the early 1940's that have a lower waist, but not a drop waist. You might want to look at some of the...
For this I could probably include some age old fashion advice, like what styles and eras benefit tall people and what benefit vertically challenged people like me, haha.
Out of the book, Goldleaf, you might want to try 1920's or 1960's, the empire waist of the 1960's would be wonderful for...
Good ones! I have already put some in on both those topics, but I can deffinatly add more. What kind of advice would you like to see for plus sized women? Certain eras to wear, styles?
I think there are a hundred ways of spelling it....There are a couple of people I know with the last name spelled like this, there is also that actress Shanon Dougherty.
Lets see your Babies! (Aka cars!)
I bet some people on here have some ausome vintage cars, I am a huge fan of autos, both new and used. To start here is mine. Not exactly vintage since it is circa 2002, but it has been my faithful companion for 5 years :(, sorry to American car companies,but...
Exactly! That's why writers write, and editors edit. I showed this to a couple of people from my former writing class in college, and most of the critique was about the plot, characters, what they wanted to see, what I should take out. When you are creative, and a writer, your mind moves at a...
That's ok. I don't mind if ONE person tells me about grammer, but to have 5 people? I think its just overkill....Like I said, I have a couple of friends who love editing and will do that for me...All I just wanted was some suggestions for my first draft on characters/plot, also with the "noir"...
I hate anything frou-frou, there is nothing pink in my house, or lace, or chintz or wall papered. I think frou frou is cute if you are 7 years old....For me, I am in love with rich colors, deep reds, blues, golds, jewel tones. I love anything streamlined and art deco. I am a big fan of chrome...
Well...now I am :) I just thought that was implied, but if you didn't get it from my first post, here it is again, that is what I am looking for. I have a good friend who does editing for me, so I just ask, if you have critisism to give me,please let it be about my characters/plot, I just don't...
Its stupid, but the sad truth of it is, alot of women play mind games and are very manipulative, especially with men, but with each other also. Its why most of my friends are men and the friends of mine who are female are not manipulative or backstabbing. I am out of high school, but I swear...
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