Thats interesting. Several gentleman from the board, and several friends of mine read it never once mentioned the grammer, I read it through myself and I can't see that it is "unreadable", maybe a few mistakes of coarse, also Myspace dosn't let me format it correctly, sometimes you loose some...
Well yes, its just my first draft that I punched out in two days. Of coarse its going to an editor, I just wanted get people's basics ideas on the story and plot....Also that first that that you were correcting isn't part of the story, its just something I quickly typed out as a little...
My detective fiction noir short story in completed for anyone who wants to read it. It is located in my blog, which is on my Myspace page.
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=48213342
What's so weird about vintage shoes is that there are only certain decades that I find a lot that fit, or clothing for that matter. I find the 1930's, how the dresses were cut, and the shoes fit absolutely perfect, the 1940's for some reason is almost always big on me. In most shoes I am...
No, but my date that I went with, who ironically was named Jack, was afraid the ship might sink because of the theme hehe, I don't think it helped that they played " My heart will go on" either....
Yes, that pic in my avatar is me, though unfortunately not in a vintage dress...
I think the key is, not how much you spend, but how much you like the item. I have items from thrift stores, that I have worn for years, and I still love them as much today, as I did when I first bought them, the same is true for vintage, sometimes some of the least expensive pieces have been...
I think the beauty of today is women have a choice. It is both exceptable for them to stay home or go out to the work place and also it is increasingly acceptable for a man to stay home as well, ie, be a stay at home dad. I would actually prefer not work a full time job and stay at home, since...
I have a really hard time finding foundation and I was just wondering if any of you gals might be able to recommend one for me. The problem is, I have pretty dry skin and it has gotten drier since I have moved to the San Fernando Valley, so when I put a lot of different types of foundations on...
DVF is pretty reasonable compared to the likes of Chanel, Michael Kors, and Carolina Herrera, but its not like getting a dress at Gap either.
I tend to shop a little differently, actually more like a man. A lot of women buy many, many cheap trendy items and wear them only a few times, where...
I think the best vintage suitor is someone who recognizes both the old and the new, and it takes a lady to make a good suitor. It shouldn't just be up to the man to pay for everything, or to open the door all of the time. A lot of the men I have dated I have actually made more money then them...
I have a thing for goatees, so on some men, they are really attractive. I am not really one for beards, but I also do like mustaches if they are worn like Clark Gable did......swoon....I don't like a lot of the mustaches men wear these days that are kind of bushy, it has to be sleek.
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