if you are looking for input, I think the shoulder and chest and body width and length and neck hole can be a size smaller, but the sleeve is perfect, so when the shoulder is made narrower then the sleeve must be added.
the detail of the jacket is personal preferences, but since there is a lot going on already a tonal stitching might tone it down a bit?
the detail of the jacket is personal preferences, but since there is a lot going on already a tonal stitching might tone it down a bit?