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I don't drink at all...

Foofoogal

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I love it.

I'll write directions to my endless maze of remembrance...and keep it in the folds of this crumpled note, as the world I've never shared.

Isn't it true we all have such personal different memories. Sometimes I cannot even believe my own life and the turns and twists. Hidden dreams and desires that noone will ever know.
 

Miss_Bella_Hell

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I'm a Hemingway fan, so while I like the sentiment, I think it uses too many words to express a melancholy. 'Course, I am no writer, and there's no reason to pay attention to my critique.

Just try to write something true...it's the hardest thing a writer can do. :)
 

Paisley

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More soda, please

MP, I appreciate the effort. But I feel like every sentence is trying to be clever. It's too complicated a cocktail for me.
 

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